距離DSE英文考試時間所餘無幾，21分滿分的作文，當中7分為Content，7分為Language，7分為Organization。
同學若能把cohesive devices好好運用於每段落開首， Organization的7分便取之八九。
層遞關係的銜接 Hierarchical transition :
l Additionally,
l In addition to…
l Also,
l Apart from that,
l Besides,
l Furthermore,
l More than that,
l Moreover,
l Not only (noun) but also (noun) ……
Not only (do/does/did) / (verb to be) + (subject)…. , but (pronoun) ….
e.g. Not only does the academic pressure make the students stressful, but it also lead to students suicidal behaviors.
Not only (do/does/did) / (verb to be) + (subject)…. , but (pronoun) ….
e.g. Not only does the academic pressure make the students stressful, but it also lead to students suicidal behaviors.
l On the other hand,
l On top of that,
l ….whilst/ as well as / whereas….
相反關係的銜接 Contrasting
transition :
l …but…
l Alternatively,
l Although…
l Contradictorily,
l Contrarily,
l Conversely,
l Despite (noun) / In spite of (noun),
l Even though….
l However,
l In contrast to…..
l Incompatibly,
l Instead of (noun / gerund),
l Instead,
l Nevertheless,
l Nonetheless,
l Notwithstanding (noun / gerund) …..
l On the contrary,
l Oppositely,
l Rather than ….. ,
l Unlike…. ,
l Yet,
因果關係的銜接 Causational transition :
l Accordingly,
l As a result,
l Because of….
l Consequently,
l Due to…
l For this reason,
l Hence,
l Henceforth / thereafter
l In consequence,
l In order to….
l Owing to…
l Since …
l So …
l Thereby
l Therefore,
l Thus,
l Under these circumstances,
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